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If I Could Freeze Time

Contributed by lesoleilnoire on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 06:48:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

If I could freeze time,
my magical hands would have icicles dangling from my fingertips.
A steel-blue beam would freeze the moment;
I would be free to live like as I please.

If I could freeze time,
my lone heart beat would thump one lonely beat;
my tears would freeze on my eyelashes.
Solitary eternity would haunt me like a ghost.

If I could freeze time,
calm quiet would whisper insane shrieks in my ears.
Cold sweat from fear would ice my heart.
Time must tick tock in its natural beat.

Copyright © lesoleilnoire ... [ 2009-10-17 18:48:54]
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Re: If I Could Freeze Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 08:58:25 PM AEST
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Great poem, but I don't think I would want to freeze time, I would but it would take to long for me to do what I want before I unfroze it. I'm sorry you have tears at your eyes, but everything gets better eventually, because eventually will always come eventually.

Great poem, if you freeze time unfreeze me so I may look for the answers I seek. Besides wouldn't you want someone to talk to?
anyway I hope to read more soon
-kelly

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