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Trapped
Contributed by
tashisme
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Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 05:59:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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a desperation deep inside
of lonliness i try to hide
all is well, life is good
i'll go on as i should
it seems that i will make it last
then night falls and brings the past
the fake has gone and left me here
wiping away tear after tear
i cry now for what could have been
things i want and never seen
i must move on, act as i should
all is well, life is good?
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2009-10-17 17:59:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Trapped
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mars on
Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 09:24:07 PM AEST (User
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Wow! Splendid! Concise, not to deal with the trifles of words of grammar, and a kick at the end.
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