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let go...
Contributed by
jenniferstein2006
on
Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 10:57:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I don't know why...
but the darkness in your eyes...
makes my heart weep...
makes my heart cry...
the sound of your voice...
sends shivers down my spine...
it does the same for you...
do not deny...
the feel of your hands
touching me softly
lifting up my sorrows
swallowing my pride
as the darkness inside
slowly awakens
to grasp onto your soul
as we try to let go....
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jenniferstein2006
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2009-10-17 10:57:46]
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Re: let go...
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 11:17:59 AM AEST
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Random? or a voice from deep with in stirring asking for release.
This poem has a very painful power to it for me.
Nicely done.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: let go...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 03:28:01 AM AEST
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A nice poem, well constructed.
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