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rain
Contributed by
AJA
on
Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 06:54:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Adolescent emotions of above,
Playing Russian roulette.
Bullets of raw emotion glide,
Bolts of sadness strike.
Unwilling to compromise, to let conflict die.
Until the arrival of bright influence,
Well all be stuck inside.
Copyright ©
AJA
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2009-10-17 06:54:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: rain
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadwriter on
Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 06:30:02 PM AEST (User
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Great write. Many times these continue well into adulthood. Guidence is always good. You will find many amazing people who are willing to help if you let them.
Deadwriter
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