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Memories Melody
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 06:28:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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So … Blue, the color of my world
A Hushed, Unwritten Symphony
Cried a long and lonely heartfelt note
Reaching for a soul, Lost in the Sadness
Left drowning in the Darkness of Sorrow
Unanswered melody of forgiveness
Child’s Play to my demons
Heart Song left bleeding
Your Lustful Blade
Wields a Tempest Wake
A Legacy, Fashioned in Time
Through the Looking Glass, I dream
If Only for a Moment … Deliver Me
This Indifference Hurts, leaving me
Penned In, Security Undone
5 Senses Scream pleading for normality
Allowing me to Just Be
Breathless from the effort
Emotional Infidelity leaving my world’s song
Broken
A Hushed, Unwritten Symphony
So … Blue the color of my world
Peace
~Shannon Musser~
Addendum: There may be a rewrite coming soon in the form of a song … with any luck we will put it to music and be able to hear it as well.
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Re: Memories Melody
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 06:56:59 PM AEST
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Shannon,
I am glad you posted this tonight.
It is beautiful, I felt each word on so many levels. I have been trying to pick a favorite part but each bit of this melts my heart.
Love you sis
Shall
(hugs to jecks too!) |
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Re: Memories Melody
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by Spike on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 07:15:27 PM AEST
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A clever and accomplished arrangement, Shannon, and it shines with emotion and heart. Might try it myself!
Spike
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Re: Memories Melody
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 07:50:53 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful!
Heidi |
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Re: Memories Melody
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 08:04:55 PM AEST
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Gret job and awesomly creative.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Memories Melody
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 11:43:52 AM AEST
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OH sweetie, this was sensational!
What a wonderful way to incorporate all your titles!! This worked
so flowingly, you'd think they were separate words and phrases you
just came up with. :) Like they were written together, straight from
your beautiful heart. (And they were .. just not all at the once. )
Exceptional post hun. I don't think I'll be trying that ... too many
titles. :P *raises glass to your creativity*
*huge squeezies*
~ Breezy |
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Re: Memories Melody
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 07:27:38 AM AEST
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WooHooo!!!!
It turned out beautiful!
Very full of depth. I would never have thought it was filled with titles seeing it stand on its own.
The thanks is sweet, though I did very little.
Good luck with the song! I can't wait to hear it! |
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