|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
It Could Have Been A Good Life
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 06:21:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Bright Eyes blaring wide
Slowly Closing inch by inch
Day by day
To the chorus of the tide
Drenched in misery
Life just keeps passing by
One day the wall of death
Shall come crashing down on me
And the tears shall flow substantially
And no amount of begging or yearning for the past
Shall bring to me more time
And I will know that what was
Will never be again
And what could have been
Will forever remain out of reach
And I'll know
That this is goodbye
And my one chance
It Could have been a good life
Copyright ©
Onslaught
... [
2009-10-15 18:21:13]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: It Could Have Been A Good Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 09:19:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I do not really know what to say.
The depth of pain here hurts my heart.
This poem well written but I feel sorry for the pain that caused it.
Michelle |
|
|
Re: It Could Have Been A Good Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 04:50:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Again, this is outstanding poetry in a second-language. Your command of english is easily that of a native of Great Britain, maybe better in some cases. Superb!
-Phil |
|
|
Re: It Could Have Been A Good Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by redwest802 on
Tuesday, 29th September 2020 @ 02:14:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| good work |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
