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In A Corner
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 14th October 2009 @ 08:19:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Backed in a Corner,
fenced in by ridicule,
isolated me
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-10-14 20:19:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In A Corner
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 09:06:36 PM AEST (User
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I don't do haiku, I've never tried, and my poems tend to be long, they'll go on for pages and pages, some would never stop if I didn't make them. This is the second poem of yours I've read, and well, I know that a poem doesn't need to be long to say what it needs to, but you do it perfectly. You convey a massive amount of emotion, a complete story, with just a few words, put in just the right place. I'm impressed.
Thank you,
David |
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