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Nothing Left For Me
Contributed by
jaeann
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Wednesday, 14th October 2009 @ 04:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lost in a look
that you so abruptly took...
Lost in a touch
that's always way much....
Lost in the way
begging you to stay....
Lost in a passion
no one could ever cash in....
Lost in your destiny
with nothing left for me....
Lost in her grief
absent of any relief....
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jaeann
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2009-10-14 16:17:19]
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Re: Nothing Left For Me
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 09:10:35 PM AEST
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Each word of this is so beautiful yet so sad.
Well written verse. May your heart mend soon.
Hugssssssss
Michelle |
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Re: Nothing Left For Me
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 12:26:36 PM AEST
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I always wonder about the difference in Poetry and Prose until I read one of your lovely poems. True Poetry dear Jaymee, like aged wine. The deepest of feelings are always present, mellow, sour, sweet, bitter, refreshing and stale.
And why do we always blame ourselves for others shortcomings? Remember if he had really loved you Jaymee, he would never have gone away!!! For Love never fails. Why should you "pick-up" where he left off?
All you can do is feel pity for him, not you...........If the tables were turned, would you have run away?
Deeply felt poem..........so sad, so reeling!
Love you
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