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Lost
Contributed by
Kirby
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Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 06:17:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Onto a bed
I threw myself
From all this pain.
I can’t last
Like this.
And if I tried,
Would I just fail?
Or prevail over the circumstances.
I won’t ever know
Nor will anyone else.
Because I am still on this bed
Crying so hard,
Because you’re dead.
You’ve been dead to me for so long.
Ever since you left me
When I was so young
Not to understand
What pain was to come
Ten years later.
Then you left me again.
And now you’re dead.
So how can I say goodbye?
Or that I love you?
How can I dismantle this pain
That lays on my heart.
So heavy?
It makes me stay
In this bed
Never to get up
Until I see you again.
Copyright ©
Kirby
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2003-04-01 06:17:01]
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Re: Lost
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by Dragons_Of_Rose on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 11:29:06 AM AEST
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The saddest of emotion
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Re: Lost
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by kevinblar on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 04:12:12 PM AEST
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wow that was really good
its like im feeling right now
and it helps to know others have felt or feel the same way i do sometimes
well done |
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:21:08 AM AEST
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What a fantastic poem. My dad never physically left me but he stopped being a aprt of my life when I was 8 so I know some of what you are feeling. It is really good to share the emotion sometimes huh?
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Re: Lost
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by Kirby on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:48:42 PM AEST
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| Yeah it's great to see that someone feels the way that I do! Sleepless_siren, you are a really kewl person! I write from my heart and am glad you liked it! Talk to ya later! Well hoe to atleast! |
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Re: Lost
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by Kirby on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:50:28 PM AEST
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| Thanks kevinblar for the wonderful comment! And since I went through all of this and still am I would be glad to talk to you if u ever need anyone that knows what u are going through kinda! but thanks again! |
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