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Fall In Love Tonight
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 12:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I don't know what it is about you
Your eyes...
Your voice...
Can't figure it out
Even in the moonlight
It seems...
So right...
They say I'm so beautiful
More beautiful
Than just by sight
So look at me
And fall in love, tonight.
I don't understand what I need
To make...
You see...
Can't comprehend
Even in this romantic light
I'm invisible...
From your sight...
In my dreams I'm your angel
Only your angel
Then I wake up in the night...
Longing for you to notice me
And fall in love, tonight.
Copyright ©
MoonlightKiss
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2009-10-13 12:08:58]
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Re: Fall In Love Tonight
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by CwisssStunnaaa on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 02:45:38 PM AEST
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love the write
keep up the nice work |
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Re: Fall In Love Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 05:11:21 PM AEST
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This has a beautiful elegance to it. The flow was perfection and the rhymes occured in all the right places. Sublime!
-Phil |
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Re: Fall In Love Tonight
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by Starchild7 on
Wednesday, 14th October 2009 @ 03:06:45 PM AEST
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That was beautiful to read, thank you for sharing.
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Re: Fall In Love Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th October 2009 @ 04:11:04 PM AEST
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I can remember many times wishing (and dreaming) about having a particular someone notice me, someone who never knew how much I wanted them to pay attention.
I think a lot of people will relate to this. I know I do. |
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