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why did you leave me
Contributed by
kevinblar
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Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 06:09:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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why did you leave me
out in the rain
you caused me so much pain
i wish you were still here
but your not so i gess
that you have preyed on my worst fear
that was mean
but i can deal
just dont go to our restauraunt and eat the veal
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kevinblar
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2003-04-01 06:09:23]
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Re: why did you leave me
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by Dragons_Of_Rose on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 11:32:37 AM AEST
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Re: why did you leave me
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by kevinblar on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 06:49:19 PM AEST
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thank you i had a lot on my mind when i wrote that my girlfriend had just left me
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Re: why did you leave me
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by Kirby on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 07:26:26 PM AEST
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| This poem is soo cute and sad at the same time! I love the last line! |
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Re: why did you leave me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 04:34:16 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Kevin... This was so cute... and I too, enjoyed the last line....
Jenni |
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