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The answer
Contributed by
AndreiStefan
on
Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 10:30:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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From dawn into dusk
the fire had stood
Until he has lost
He's finaly mood.
And brought back to earth
from tallest of skies
He gently refuse
the Grail of their lies.
And so it begins
the quest for the answer
he no longer knows.
the logics of God.
As he is thrown back
To final emotion
The answer is dust
And greatest devotion.
Copyright ©
AndreiStefan
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2009-10-12 10:30:50]
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Re: The answer
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 03:15:33 PM AEST
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I looked at your title The Answer and hoped it would give me one of the answers I was looking for. I was disappointed at that but I loved the poem, The answer you say is dust, but I will spend a life time finding every bit of dust I can to put together a puzzle of sand if I have to
No question left unsolved, answer it all puzzling it together a piece of dust at a time
Great poem
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Re: The answer
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by AndreiStefan on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 03:21:04 AM AEST
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| Thank you for your comment, but the answer it s not dust...the answer seems to be the jurney. Thanks again and come back soon with more comments. |
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Re: The answer
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by CwisssStunnaaa on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 02:56:34 PM AEST
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love the write
keep up the nice work |
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