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The Last Drop of Ink
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 09:26:59 PM in AEST
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Lonely blue droplet,
free-floating in mid-air.
Its fate is in gravity's hands;
plunging down, down, down.
Its brief life flashing before its eyes;
true life began outside of the pen.
Being born simply to die,
crashing onto paper,
Is a meaning word or a smudge left behind?
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-10-11 21:26:59]
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Re: The Last Drop of Ink
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by kye on
Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 07:24:32 AM AEST
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Well this is certainly deep, thoughtful and a tad mystic.
As a reader, I believe that "blue droplet" has a universal power just like tears - the universal language. When you think of how phenomenal it is that words, just alphabetic letters - have so much power, they truly do.
Your poem highlights your depth of thought and there was a sadness to your words.
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Re: The Last Drop of Ink
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 03:05:50 PM AEST
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I think Kye's right every word every letter can hold some meaning, If you give the words meaning then the meaning is there, This was a great poem, shows some sadness in it but great poem all the same full of meaning
hope to read more soon
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