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a thimble . . . too much
Contributed by
elle
on
Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 08:12:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I've tried to think
without the taste of you
on my lips
so liberating. . .
tried to laugh
without the ridiculous sensation
of us
never again. . .
thought I, from my damsel,
point of veiw
I wish this air to be as ether
every breath deeper
into the moment. . .
the moment. . .
the moment before you
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-10-11 20:12:08]
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Re: a thimble . . . too much
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 08:33:59 PM AEST
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Awesomely creative writing.
Good work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: a thimble . . . too much
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 09:11:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece. I get the essence of lingering throughout this piece. Great job!
Heidi |
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Re: a thimble . . . too much
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 09:26:28 PM AEST
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Yeah, don't a lot of us!!!!
Awesome job as usual. |
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Re: a thimble . . . too much
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by ming on
Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 10:07:10 AM AEST
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| I breathed deeper after and while reading this. Thanks Elle! Loved it. |
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