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You will win a reputation for yourself

Contributed by holy on Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 12:09:57 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You will win a reputation for yourself
2008-06-16 13:41:09
You will win a reputation for yourself

"What is up?"

I ask you when you come in our living room.

You sit on the safe and say,

"We had a long talk.

he wanted to do more trial-production of new items,

he hoped his new company will hit the mark with its new product,

because he believe it will be just what the public wanted."

"What are you going to do?

is there any chance whatever?"

I pass you a cup of water.

You pause,

drink some water,

reflect for a moment,

and resume,

"I still haven't worked out how to begin,

but I want to try my luck in Zhumadian,

maybe there will be a nice place for me to begin."

I smile at you with a wonder,

"Zhumadian?

Great name!

what do you think of it?

I think you will win a reputation for yourself there,

it will bring you a brighter future."

"I think so,

but I am not sure."

I can see you feel better.

I am excited saying to you,

"Zhumadian means a great place is readied for a horse to stay,

we were born in horse year,

we are both lovely horse.

Haha,

it is just a successful place for us."

You are in delight,

"Haha,

great wife!

why can't I think of it?

your words always light my heart."

"Dear,

Because I can see your heart,

because I understand what you feel.

Of course,

my heart will accompany you to open up new markets."

I give you my kiss.

"Win,

I can win!

But,

new product, new markets,

there are many things need I to do,

I must learn more knowledge in it."

you are pleased......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-11 00:09:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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