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The Streets Are Unforgiving
Contributed by
Percursors
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Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 04:39:05 AM in AEST
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“On a warm April day, on the east cost, wind lightly blowing, sun slowing rising, clouds quickly rolling, moon still showing. Grass green and soft and a refection on the ocean water shows, open doors up on a balcony high. Curtains rolling, white carpet, tan walls, candles left burring, white lace draped over the bed like a tent. Life must be so perfect for them. Young love with long nights, rich and famous by the day light. What more could you want? Not much, for a small town gurl with big dreams. But what do you dream about when all your dreams come true? Just hope it never happens to you, always have a dream.
Their life so perfect, bound to get old and die, with them left to wilt inside. Killing each other to see the sun light. The little things you take for granite. The one you love, the one who loves you too. But still things are to right, bound to go bad, I have to go plan. Thinking it out, preparing the damned.
How strong is love? Will it make it through hell? People say yes but have they ever been there? Have they ever died young? Do they know what true fear is, true pain, true torture, true hate is?
Accidents covered up by lies. Lies covered up by death, unclear motives, no motives, only me, Fate. Fate and faith one in the same. What I look like and what I do, depends on who’s looking and how they do, at play my game of will confiscating, mind twisting pain. But for now I’ll let the two young lovers dream of worster dayz that might come their way.”
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Re: The Streets Are Unforgiving
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 07:59:09 PM AEST
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Very good a very interesting, thought provoking read. Maybe it should be in poem format so it can be easier to read.
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Re: The Streets Are Unforgiving
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by Ember on
Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 08:26:26 PM AEST
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| he cass thought it was good |
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Re: The Streets Are Unforgiving
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 04:25:43 AM AEST
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Hello, Percursors! I think you have a nice thought to start your book. Like the other comment, this could be put into poem form. To make it most effective, proof read for spelling and typing errors. Its good to have another person proof read it, too. The professionals usually use proofreaders. Very few of us are perfect spellers. Good going. Keep writing. I hope to see your story published someday.
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Re: The Streets Are Unforgiving
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by knowWhat_kind on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 12:35:28 AM AEST
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| Well cassie I like this alot and i can not wait to read your book |
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