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Heavy Breathing
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 09:10:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Breathing heavily,
inhaling you with each touch,
exhaling pure lust
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-10-10 21:10:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Heavy Breathing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 10:46:42 PM AEST (User
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I would have to say this is one of the best haikus I have ever read. I mean that. While I am enjoying these, which seems to be a series,
, I mean of all haikus I have ever read, this is definitely in that group at the top. |
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