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I need you're acceptance
Contributed by
bubkin
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Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 04:55:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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You push me and pull me and tear me apart
You twist all my words and in seconds break my heart
Ive tried to be all you wanted me to be
To have your acceptance will set my heart so free
One day you love me and want me around
The next you hate me and push me to the ground
I try to be your perfection but perfection i can never be
So i stand here and pray you accept me for me
I've sculpted your masterpiece on my delicate frame
But the fire in my heart you will never tame
I want to be yours , in my heart i always have been
but whether you want me is yet to be seen
Copyright ©
bubkin
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2009-10-10 16:55:44]
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Re: I need you're acceptance
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 11:02:44 PM AEST
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Very emotional and you conveyed it well.
There is also seems to be confusion in the person's mind. Perhaps she doesn't consciously realize that in this line:
Ive tried to be all you wanted me to be
but perhaps subconsciously knows it in this line:
So i stand here and pray you accept me for me
That is the best way to think about it, for trying to be everything we can be for someone, even things we're not, could be a mistake. People really should be themselves and others should accept them as they are.
This is a pleading and yearning poem....nicely done.
Take care
Tim
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Re: I need you're acceptance
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 05:52:51 AM AEST
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