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Sympathy for Murderers.
Contributed by
Nancypants
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Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 02:48:06 PM in AEST
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You shall find nowhere, a more immaculate love
Than the love of a woman that shot the Dove
and the man who killed the man he is.
The mother who keeps herself captive
who loves for she has nothing else to give
and can find no better reason to live
Her selfish heart it beat the bird
His selfish Verse killed all my words
Their selfish minds shall find no peace
Their red hands shall never cease,
they have strangled, and smothered
they crave release.
The choice is mine
it's death or glory?
Glory is more appealing... surely?
I'll surely kill you in the morning.
In the morning.
In the Mourning.
Copyright ©
Nancypants
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2009-10-10 14:48:06]
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Re: Sympathy for Murderers.
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by Nancypants on
Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 02:54:18 PM AEST
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| leave comments of all opinions and thoughts. I would much appreciate other peoples ideas and feelings on this subject, thank you for taking the time to read, Nancypants :) |
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Re: Sympathy for Murderers.
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by bubkin on
Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 03:16:34 PM AEST
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| well written but a very brutal message , really hit home with that one x x |
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Re: Sympathy for Murderers.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 11:22:40 PM AEST
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I just got finished saying to myself "I'll steer clear of that one". But I cannot. I could probably write a marathon comment on my thoughts about abortion but I'll just leave it at this.
As for as I am concerned, it is the worse form of child abuse.
Anyway, the poem brings up probably one of the top five, if not the number one, subjects that hit a strong note on opinions. You have courage.
Tim |
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