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Try to cherish
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
on
Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 09:33:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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It's like a shadow falling over me
When the sun has to set
This sickness taking over me
About which no one will fret
I am placed in quarantine
Though not to protect others
You act like the virus is not seen
Like its not even a bother
It's my curse to carry
My burden to bear
I live life in tragedy
But you don't really care
I have to live it, day in and day out
So don't ignore me or my pain
And most of all, please don't shout
It shows all your disdain
I am the one who suffers
Of this poor body quality
But can't you try to cherish
Just what's left of me?
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MissTeenSuicide
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2009-10-10 09:33:39]
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Re: Try to cherish
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 06:12:38 AM AEST
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An excellent last stanza that really pushed the message home I thought. Good work.
-Phil |
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Re: Try to cherish
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by MoonlightKiss on
Monday, 23rd November 2009 @ 09:06:17 AM AEST
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wow, excellent job.
not only do we write very similar when it
comes to words, but we use the same
rhyming scheme!
loved it :) |
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