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A Hollow Glass Shell
Contributed by
anders
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Friday, 9th October 2009 @ 11:54:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A hollow glass shell.
That's all that is left.
So cold, and lifeless, and fragile.
I know the shell well,
The texture, the smell,
How it felt to touch,
I miss it so much...
It hasn't always been hollow,
or empty or glass,
It once overflowed
With laughter and love,
A love destined to break,
A love that can't last.
It won't fix the problem,
And not that it matters,
But i think if it looked at me,
The glass shell would shatter.
Copyright ©
anders
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2009-10-09 23:54:12]
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Re: A Hollow Glass Shell
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by LadyRose on
Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 08:37:33 AM AEST
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| oh this is so sad and beautifully written........makes me think of how breakable love can be,so fragile if not taken care of........ |
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Re: A Hollow Glass Shell
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 03:45:03 PM AEST
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Great image. The isea of a glass shell really gets across, as Lady Rose said, how fragile love is and how hollow it becomes when the passion drains away.
Nice job. |
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Re: A Hollow Glass Shell
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 06:14:13 AM AEST
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nicely writen, emotions felt, yes I agree love is fragile.
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