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In hiding

Contributed by longhaircg on Friday, 9th October 2009 @ 02:01:41 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

who owns this heart, unraval it tear it apart,
inside where it hides,
no one knows but him,
not willing to expose, camouflaged kept out of sight,
wrapped up tight, haunted by sceams, repeated in dreams,
his conscience fights monsters,I hear his screams,
kept all in gip not to slip,
lay out the truth, for the truth is not known, not even by him.
secrets kept out of sight, hides from truth,
think you know him, I dought you found out,
to himself looks a stranger, still seaching for real,
lies and games he plays, your a fool just like me.
you think you know his heart, so untrue, its not for me or you,
convience is what he seeks, hiding the devils of his youth.
truth to him is a lie, so hides what is kept inside,
his heart is black and blue.
His DAD's was too.

Copyright © longhaircg ... [ 2009-10-09 14:01:41]
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Re: In hiding (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 05:57:04 PM AEST
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Sounds like someone to stay away from.

Your use of internal rhymes made this an interesting read.

"who owns this heart, unraval it tear it apart,"

"so hides what is kept inside"

Good job.

Re: In hiding (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 01:55:39 PM AEST
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This sends a very powerful message in your writing. I must say you truly know to get to the readers heart and prove the message you need to give
Take care

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