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darkness comes
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 06:48:47 PM in AEST
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clear outward cast i stare, warm crisp calm air,
gental thoughts piercing a glimpse,
swelling heart out of the dark,
embarks days forever gone,
tear glistens in moonlit night,
stars listen silently, knowing whats inside of me,
days past can not change, future cast yet to see,
shooting star, guiding light, wish I may, wish I might,
give me this wish tonight,
clenched eyes so tight, rambling words, not a wish in sight,
I stare in darkeness comes, warm chilling calm blankets me,
a perfect gift I recieve, comforting my soul, not to bleed.
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2009-10-08 18:48:47]
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Re: darkness comes
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by reneeeiras on
Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 08:59:13 PM AEST
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| Beautifully done!! |
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Re: darkness comes
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by Recyclebin on
Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 09:02:14 PM AEST
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Wow... I felt like I was actually there. This is a powerful verse..
Loved it
~Bin~ |
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Re: darkness comes
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 09:33:27 PM AEST
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| this was intense.....very well put down....you had me there....wishing not to bleed myself..... |
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Re: darkness comes
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by Brasco on
Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 03:59:40 AM AEST
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I also enjoyed this one, it really spoke to me!
And thanks for reading my work, much appreciated. |
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