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by any other
Contributed by
ming
on
Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 05:38:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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a wall rose
it is not
a flower
October's
grey light
future garden
under decay
not able
to awake
here is
my next
step...
falling.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-10-08 17:38:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: by any other
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th October 2009 @ 12:15:24 PM AEST (User
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Very romantic |
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Re: by any other
(User Rating: 1 ) by dirk-velvet on
Friday, 9th October 2009 @ 03:53:12 PM AEST (User
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I find peace and comfort in your words.
to me an October garden is ... soothing.
For life will emerge from decay. ... stronger.
And the powerful desire to move forward even if still in a state of sleep,
leaves one falling.
( i love the way you put down words ! ) |
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