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Unclear
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 12:26:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I'd like to be swimming
deep in my own head
with your voice as my lullaby
it's cloudy in here
and I'm not thinking clear
but I like it this way...
in my dream like state.
Kissing the sanity,
like bars on the window, and flowers in a gun
We're reading their thoughts
(Not much is going on)
they watch my lips
as I smile, laugh, or speak
looking for answers I cannot give
Don't get me wrong
I'd hold you if I could
but the palm of my hand is not big enough
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2009-10-08 12:26:58]
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Re: Unclear
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th October 2009 @ 04:08:54 AM AEST
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Some interesting ambiguous stuff, with some creative similies / metaphors thrown in.
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Re: Unclear
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th October 2009 @ 01:32:34 PM AEST
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Yeah, that's the stuff.  |
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