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6K in damages later...
Contributed by
stay_gold
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Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 09:20:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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i hated you almost from the start,
i don't think that you had a heart
to put me through the hell you made me know
throw me into the tub again, your own personal moat
sit and cry, locked in your stupid car, while i wished that you'd just go
but you'd always end up coming back to never do a thing
but burn the walls, get your way and sulk over just about everything
you never thanked me for my help, you never seemed to care
the day i blacked out, fell to the floor and came home your stare
you never wanted to help me, you just screamed and pushed me more
i was in my most fragile state, too stretched across the boards
so i sought help from the others that actually seemed to know
what i went through, and what i thought about while in my deepest low
and then i finally came out on top, i found where i belonged
with no help coming from your end, my trust in you was gone
i always had suspicions and i always had my doubts,
i never thought that one day all my hunches would pan out
until that time it all came crashing down
i saw all that i needed to see, packed up and skipped this town
if i know you, you're miserable and screaming at him now
if you knew me, you'd know i'm moving on to different ground.
i hope that everything will turn out the way i think it will
when it does i'll point and laugh perched way up on my hill.
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stay_gold
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2009-10-07 09:20:58]
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Re: 6K in damages later...
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 09:54:47 AM AEST
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sometimes hind sight is all sight, and the only one we can change is ourselves, hang in there it sounds as if you were right
good write
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Re: 6K in damages later...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 03:52:03 PM AEST
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This is what poetry is good for.
Let out those bottled-up feelings amd clear your mind of them.
And good for you for doing so.
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