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Unzipped
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 12:50:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Unzipping slowly,
revealing curvy dreams,
uncovering truth
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-10-07 00:50:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unzipped
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 12:53:27 AM AEST (User
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You're just tryin' to drive all us guys insane. ;-)
I like the drive.
I like certain types of insanity. ;-)
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Re: Unzipped
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 03:09:57 AM AEST (User
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Here we go again! Blood pressure time!
I can hear the zip ......
I can see the curves .....
I could ................................???
Tommy
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Re: Unzipped
(User Rating: 1 ) by stay_gold on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 07:11:44 AM AEST (User
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nice, it leaves alot to the imagination...
short and sweet. well done |
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