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Shatters
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 12:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The color draining from her face
She's flawed and disappointed
not wanting love anymore
Knowing love is a bitter illusion
deceptive to the mind
It may hold your hand at one time or another
or the knife at your throat
You learn that when you give it your all,
you are doomed to fall, fall, fall
A deep grieving loss while your heart
kept captive by your tears,
can never be pure or untainted again.
When you let love use you
that is a loss you will never escape.
Your body may change
breasts become full, hair grow long
Never the same again will you be
Never will you ever love again so innocently.
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Inevitable
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2009-10-06 12:57:44]
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Re: Shatters
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 11:23:33 PM AEST
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Uh, except for the breasts become full part, I soooooooooooooooo relate to this. Truer words could have never been spoken and I am sorry you (or the person in this) had to got through it too.
I can feel that pain.
Nicely written.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Shatters
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 12:43:30 PM AEST
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Very true, very true indeed.
-Phil |
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