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Mumbling My Words
Contributed by
mesano
on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 04:46:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Shyly swirling, twirling my body,
Awkwardly gliding, sliding my feet,
Dancing through the curves and turns,
That reside inside my head,
my mind
searching, it's lurking,
But I've lost it.
Clumsily stumbling, mumbling my words,
Sincerley blushing, rushing my pace,
Smiling across the waves and wakes,
From ducks on sunset water,
my eyes
reflecting, they smile,
And I shine.
Copyright ©
mesano
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2009-10-06 04:46:49]
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Re: Mumbling My Words
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 05:47:13 AM AEST
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hey mesano,
really smooth rhyme and tempo in this gem, that would have pull on the street as much as the page. Definitely a poem to be spoken as much as read. Genuine work of art and a sweet surrender of the senses this night and any night. Thankyou.
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Re: Mumbling My Words
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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The flow was absolutely gorgeous and the imagery was beautiful, superb work!
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Re: Mumbling My Words
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 3rd March 2012 @ 05:05:27 PM AEST
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love it, can tell you just went with it, poems are best when spontanious and not over thought, great write,
your welcome to comment on my poems if you want,
appreciate all feed back
possitive or negative
it can only make us better, thanks
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