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Old Friend

Contributed by recyclebin on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 09:43:39 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



This evening so refreshingly cool,
A chair and bottle of fine wine.
Mesmerized as the surf crashes,
beyond the breakers,
palms waver in the sound.
The sheen reflects your ghost,
Burnt Orange casts on the Ivory Coast.
Aura prism, blended edges of streaking colors,
Holding my breath,
minutes seem like hours.
You command without giving order,
Giving love the hope to dream.
All cares vanish, the soul realizing….
Just how beautiful this world really is.
Your magnificence, a potent symphony
That quietly settles down to a soft harmony.
With respect to you,
Waving good-bye, nothing equal to you.
Good night old friend,
As I watch you set in the night sky.




Copyright © recyclebin ... [ 2009-10-05 21:43:39]
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Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 10:06:18 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful I sat there with you tonight. thankyou for the write
sp


Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 10:29:15 AM AEST
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Masterful imagery, great work.

-Phil


Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 11:16:00 PM AEST
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You have painted a beautiful picture of the sunset and the serenity surrounding it with words.

*applauds*

Tim
cool dude


Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 06:39:44 PM AEST
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Awesome picture. I need to be where you are.

Greta write.

Deadwriter


Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 06:59:10 PM AEST
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Superb imagery, Bin... excellent write...
Miss Jenni


Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 07:11:07 PM AEST
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bin, you certainly are master of description. I was practically sighing
through this entire write. And OH how damn lucky for you to be in a
position to gain an inspiration such as this. Beautifully exquisite!

And bravo for reminding us of the small wonders that make life;
that make being ALIVE so grand. Exceptional

~ Breezy



Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 07:40:49 AM AEST
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Hi there,

I could see it, I could hear it, I could smell it,
I was there!

Beautiful piece of verse, my friend!

Tommy


Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 03:43:10 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. It reminds me of Daytona beach and an old friend of mine that means the world to me.
blessings,
emy




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