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Me
Contributed by
karoody
on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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this is me
doesn't look like much
but i traveled long roads
through thorns
uphill
little shelter
this is my world
doen't look like much
but i built it
with tired hands
long hours
little help
this is you
doesn't seem like much
but to you it's the world
you traveled your road
this i know
so i let you be you
this is my world
doen't look like much
but i'll share if you wish
enjoy the simple beauty
stay if you like
just let me be me
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-03-31 22:05:00]
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Re: Me
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 04:17:48 AM AEST
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| Kara this is a great poem I just loved it. I will let you be you. |
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Re: Me
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 04:31:07 AM AEST
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| be you be you be you... simply beautiful little poem... blessings... |
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Re: Me
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 08:02:29 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful. I love this simplicity.. hence I shared this one, good girl. venkat |
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Re: Me
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by wazarov on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 12:25:49 AM AEST
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| you`ve set yourself free my dear and your words are your shield from now on.. one of the wonders of our time`s poetry |
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Re: Me
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 12:52:44 PM AEST
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| this is great, accepting each other for who they are, so important, your poem is lovely:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Me
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 03:57:13 PM AEST
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| i love it kara... if only the world were so |
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Re: Me
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by tier on
Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 12:02:14 AM AEST
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KARA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it sounds like you know what you want!
Tier |
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Re: Me
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:50:30 PM AEST
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loved it!
Lindsey |
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Re: Me
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by Ppaul on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:00:41 AM AEST
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| simple and effective very good |
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