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for my eyes only
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 11:23:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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take me to that place,
somewhere out of this space,
far away from today,
back to yesterday,
where I see your face,
and embrace and smell and taste,
take me to that place,
that real love comes alive,
not a jumbled mess of lies,
so let me closes my eyes,
maybe to my suprise,
there you will be,
but only I can see,
within my dreams.
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2009-10-05 11:23:48]
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Re: for my eyes only
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 02:07:54 PM AEST
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| Great dreamers think alike longhaircg. |
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Re: for my eyes only
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 03:30:32 PM AEST
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*sigh*
If only.
Tim
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Re: for my eyes only
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 04:12:41 PM AEST
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*Phil reminisces painfully
Ouch.
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Re: for my eyes only
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by pooja on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 03:16:41 AM AEST
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yeh I know what u mean....
Dreams actuall belong to the past, try but we can't be free from memories
memories of good times gone by
ur poem is beuatiful in its simplicity, clarity and focus
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Re: for my eyes only
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 05:01:26 PM AEST
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we can 'control' our dreams, it's up to u to enact/live them. i completely understand your sentiment though... a short poem well done
take care
-K.Z. |
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