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Daisy

Contributed by Dan666 on Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 06:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Her eyes stare at me and sparkle blue
I lose myself and stare straight through
I look deep and deeper, deeper still
And catch my breath from what I feel

This feeling new, takes over me
A new bound love from what I see
Heart is scarred? But so is mine
I'll tend to yours and you'll be fine

Locked up tight inside my arms
I'm always here so fear no harm
Feel my touch but sense no pain
Bad days gone, let's start again

You're for me and I'm for you
Lonely nights that I've been through
Heart throbs more when you are gone
So promise me you won't be long

Never have I felt this way
To see that smile every day
To kiss those lips, to hold that hand
The answer's simple, yes dreams can

Time will pass, time will tell
Time will prove and ring a bell
Realise now my words are true
The bell that rang was I Love You

I can't imagine you not here
I could not live to shed a tear
A law engraved on to my heart
To end together what we start

Dan - 25/09/09

For my girlfriend, Daisy.

Copyright © Dan666 ... [ 2009-10-04 18:22:30]
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Re: Daisy (User Rating: 1 )
by Obscured_Existance on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 08:04:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful! What more can I say , you show so much love in this ..Im sure she loves it any girl would :)
Oh n wb:)

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