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A Lovely Day
Contributed by
windowguy
on
Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 01:51:47 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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He stood at the bus stop
Black coat soaking wet,
The rain was pouring down,
Was his face one of regret?
No, he was quite happy
So glad to have took a walk
As, while all others looked glum
And had no cheerful talk
His outlook was much brighter
Even though he had been told
That cancer had taken root,
In his body it got a hold.
That rainfall, like pools of tears
Reflected their sad faces
Yet, to him it was a lovely day
Where no hint of mournful traces
Could be seen inside his eyes,
A young man composed, serene,
Standing with head raised high
For this lovely day he was keen.
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Re: A Lovely Day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 02:21:43 PM AEST
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| Yes! "a lovely day" |
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Re: A Lovely Day
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 12:22:54 AM AEST
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Having lost a sister, a dad, a grandfather, three uncles, & a cousin to cancer I cannot see anything lovely about it.
On positive note, perhaps you're trying to say all the sad people in this write could have it far worse than a rainy day? |
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