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~Dear Lord~

Contributed by Obscured_Existance on Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 04:36:56 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Dear Lord...
Why is life so unfair
Loved ones taken away
I look up at you
And ask you did you not think we'd care

Dear Lord...
We grow to love and adore those we lose
But suddenly taken from us
How do you chose
Do you decide an Angel they must be
Watching from heaven protecting me

Dear Lord...
I pray on my knees
You'll give me peace of mind
And tell me hes free
Free from the hurt n pain he suffered
So precious n beautiful
Jus one of a kind...

Dear Lord..
You give us many trials
Trials which are expected to succeed
If we struggle and fail
Are we punished till we beg and we plead..

Dear Lord...
Your servants we remain
Till the end of time
All I ask is please send back loved ones who were mine
Please stop the suffering and pain

Dear Lord..
Give me a chance to better myself
And be the one I should
Away from the evil
Back with the good

Dear Lord..
I bow down to the
And I make my plea
Give us the strength to serve you well
Our Creator From above
Please teach us peace and teach us Love

Dear Lord ....
One day an angel ill be
Watching those I leave behind..
Still your servant
But finally set free
Free from a world filled with pain
Free from a world i'll not see again...

Copyright © Obscured_Existance ... [ 2009-10-03 16:36:56]
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Re: ~Dear Lord~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 05:03:29 PM AEST
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A saying someone told me popped into my head when I read this "God is a kid with a stick poking at us all watching us squirm and enjoying every minute of it"
Maybe a little strange to some but to me it stuck with me, god has seemed to ignore me and everyone I love
I wait for the day I see god and he sets me free, I'm just sitting in wait

Great poem
hope to read more soon
-Kelly

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