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bare work
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 01:27:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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my words stitched
with unknowing
even though
a firm press of pen
the mind shifts
and grows confused
can you understand
the darkening
the grey gauze
stillness
more distant
than stars.
Copyright ©
ming
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2009-10-03 13:27:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: bare work
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 07:47:13 AM AEST (User
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A delicate attempt to give a glimpse of your world. Beautiful & smooth. . .Thank you! elle :) |
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Re: bare work
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 09:02:47 AM AEST (User
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