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My Hands are Tied
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 2nd October 2009 @ 08:59:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My hands are tied;
raw pain encircles my wrists.
Helpless hands fight for freedom;
blood trickles down my arms.
Crimson rope strangles all hope;
weakening my soul each moment.
Fading to numb distraction,
circulation ceases.
Freedom is trapped in a knot.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-10-02 20:59:01]
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Re: My Hands are Tied
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by Mars on
Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 12:28:20 PM AEST
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| Interesting... how you described it. Very nice. |
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Re: My Hands are Tied
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 12:29:15 AM AEST
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| This is scary and very intense. You take the reader and convey the feeling of the struggle...the frustration and panic in so very few words. Nicely done. |
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