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why do i hold on?
Contributed by
demita
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Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 11:30:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The love I have for you is a love like no other
Your all I think about and the joy of my life
I love you more with each day and I give it all to you
I placed my heart in your hands trusting you not to crush it
I took a risk and gave you everything with trust in you not to abuse it
But I'm sitting here now wishing I can just take it back
You broke that trust and stepped on my heart
My heart is aching
its physically and mentally unbearable
but I don’t have the strength to leave
still I let you hold my heart just waiting for it to repeat
I plead in my prayers to keep me from more hurt
But its something deep down I feel is inevitable
So I sit here still with a pain I fear will never leave
Buried deep inside
I sit here still and beg, please prove me wrong…
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demita
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2009-09-30 23:30:41]
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Re: why do i hold on?
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st October 2009 @ 12:00:31 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
for someone that's never written a poem before you did a great job with this.
Hang tuff, friend.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: why do i hold on?
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by Tory on
Thursday, 1st October 2009 @ 01:01:21 PM AEST
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| I think this was realy touching. you said you have never wrote befor I think you have a hidden talent. and I,m sure that you have a lot more to say. This was beautiful. welcome to the site and hope to see many more of your poems. |
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