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The Stairs of Life
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 08:52:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Reaching the top
One step closer
Winded but refusing to give up
Only to be set back
Climbing closer to the dream
One step up
Birth of a thought
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-09-30 20:52:17]
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Re: The Stairs of Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 09:14:33 PM AEST
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What a genuinely unique idea!!! I love it. The sentiment, the feeling (the journey~the struggle~the success)and your creativity.
That was excellent and I thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Tim
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Re: The Stairs of Life
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by spud on
Thursday, 1st October 2009 @ 12:28:15 AM AEST
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Yes - very unique - and the words say it all when
you grasp their intention (bottom to top).
Excellent!
Tommy
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Re: The Stairs of Life
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 1st October 2009 @ 04:21:00 PM AEST
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when i first read this i didnt understand it much becuz i read it from TOP to BOTTOM lol...but then i read it the opposite and it made more sense. i liked this. great job
take care
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