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Lost in this moment
Contributed by
shelby
on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 08:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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"Love is like an hourglass, with the heart filling up as the brain empties." Jule Renard
For a moment I shall find myself
lost
lost in this moment.
lost
within the confines of my heart
lost
beside the embers of my soul
lost
within the multi shades of love
Like the tiny granules
of sand shifting
time stands still
for no one
love is easily taken forgranted
lost within the confines of life.
For now I shall be lost
lost in the circle of loving you.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-09-30 20:11:00]
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Re: Lost in this moment
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 08:32:05 PM AEST
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| Beautiful and excellent, my dear. Mean that. Nuther one of those that I wish I had written. |
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Re: Lost in this moment
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 11:33:40 PM AEST
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| I love it, keep it up:) |
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Re: Lost in this moment
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by spud on
Thursday, 1st October 2009 @ 02:34:15 PM AEST
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Hi shel,
A well written affirmation of love and devotion.
A beautiful choice of words.
Tommy
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Re: Lost in this moment
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd October 2009 @ 09:22:13 AM AEST
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Oh Shel, this is so amazing. Such a soft and delicate approach and what
a concept (the hourglass quote- Brilliant!)! Being lost in this way makes one
almost never want to be 'found'. Is anything as euphoric as the breath of
love? Perhaps this piece. ^_^
Beautiful and magical hun. A true work of breathtaking art.
*hugs*
~ Breezy
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Re: Lost in this moment
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by emystar on
Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 01:44:55 AM AEST
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Beautiful moment.
I remember a moment or two like this.
Awesome.
big huggs, luv, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lost in this moment
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 02:57:04 PM AEST
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For now I shall be lost
lost in the circle of loving you. I can think of many worse places to be lost.
Maybe other people can take love for granted. I never could. I never will.
A very sensitive write. Enjoyed it a lot. |
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Re: Lost in this moment
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by Loende on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 06:32:31 PM AEST
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Sweetie...this just sang to me...and made me cry.
xo
~d |
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