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Morning Sunrise
Contributed by
rivanz
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Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 07:21:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The morning mist
Sprinkles down from above
A wooden fence creaks with age
The evergreen trees
Dip with dew
The grass releases
A beautiful aroma
The sun slowly rises
Behind a rosy hill
The sunshine dances through
A polished bush
Giving some flowers
Small golden haloes
Eyelids flutter open
Ears sharpen
Revealing the sights and smells
The senses tingle
And the day awakens
Copyright ©
rivanz
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2009-09-30 19:21:10]
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Re: Morning Sunrise
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 07:28:47 PM AEST
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| I love mornings! This is a refreshing reminder! elle :) |
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Re: Morning Sunrise
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 07:55:39 PM AEST
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Great descriptive imagery and excellent first post.
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