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pure
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 09:34:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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memory
two million moments
before sitting
rocker still
radical in the twilight
room
watching bright come
the way my pen
maps paper
how far
to find a way
in lines sentences
simple
complex
words
merging.
implausible
plight
brought clear
eyed
through
page
by soiled
page.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-09-30 09:34:48] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: pure
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 10:59:19 AM AEST (User
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Great ending, really powerful I thought.
-Phil
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