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dead
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Tuesday, 29th September 2009 @ 09:28:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In your eyes colors are few
like missing rainbows
there's no blue
In your heart, like solid led
no one can see this red.
locked up in your head
is it dead
In your arms I a feel a chill
yet you get your thrill
this color is black
racing up my back
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Re: dead
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 06:29:22 PM AEST (User
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I can't stand to see a "zero" anywhere Susan. You take the time to compose, and then post, all that work........and you have such a unique way of placing words that fit so rhymingly together.
This poem is perfect for explaining a "Dead Walking Person"
Fantastic............keep up the good work!
Warm love
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