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Just in case you forgot I love you
Contributed by
Angelfox
on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 06:59:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I surrender my soul
so two souls
can dance beyond old
Without regrets, without sympathy
Quietly,
I still sing, hum
sweet surreal lines of a
sensational symphony
When you are away
I stay awake
and wait.
Ponder on how
I can't wait to share
your air
Inhale you
Hold you in my lungs
Hold you while I
Hold my breath
Blue is my face when I surrender
Exhaling you slowly is my only displeasure.
Copyright ©
Angelfox
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2009-09-28 18:59:33]
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Re: Just in case you forgot I love you
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by JakerBaker88 on
Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 09:22:09 PM AEST
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Simply beautiful. My favorite part was, " Quietly, I still sing, hum sweet surreal lines of a sensational symphony." Wonderful poem; it is now one of my favorites on here.
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Re: Just in case you forgot I love you
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by sashie08 on
Monday, 31st March 2014 @ 05:11:27 AM AEST
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| love how only the release creates pain and not the air itself...different yet honest..amazing |
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