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descent. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 04:22:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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blowing sand on twilights' beach
the sting & spray at ankles' length
that soars on wind in pale moonlight
across the coarse of summers' night
gentle is the notion held
still, in shadows dip & swell
that lifts my very spirit high
into the quietest of the night
a velvet touch of delicacy
the salty lift & ebb of sea
guidance scrolled upon the stars
the lick of waves & foam, afar
shaft of light on moonbeam glow
illuminate briny undertow
the depth of sleep, woven so deep
Calypso, do you know me?
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-09-28 04:22:56]
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Re: descent. . .
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by Xnoybis on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 06:25:09 AM AEST
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Should be titled: Ascend
The best spun words can never equal the feeling of the waves in darkness. |
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Re: descent. . .
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by hetlerkh on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 06:50:26 AM AEST
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hey this is really touchy
i love ur poems ! heh
keep them up
t.c
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Re: descent. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 10:16:54 AM AEST
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Some beautiful words, good job.
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Re: descent. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 08:25:33 PM AEST
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| If she doesn't know you, she should. Beautiful, my dear. |
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Re: descent. . .
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by one-curly-fry on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 03:00:46 AM AEST
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Alone of the beach late on a warm night? That's how I felt reading this.. It's a somewhat beautiful and melancholy set of emotions this piece brings out. Very beautiful write Elle!
Tim |
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