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A soundless echo
Contributed by
hungarianhaze
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Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 12:02:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Burrowed Inside
Is cold in here
I feel a hole
A impenetrable hallow
Maybe you took something with you
Something words cant explain
Something you can feel
Damnation, I cant let go
Countless questions Pour into my mind
Sigh , A reasonable comrade
A conjoined thought of not knowing
Shared as partners
In the emotion we object as love
Your apathy so luscious
So ripe in your conscious
I know your heart
My erratic breathing in rhythm
With your heart beat
A scourge echo
I know your particles
Ive saturated in your spontaneous affection
Longing for something not anyone can fill
For it might taste bitter
I long something
Something
Sigh....
Copyright ©
hungarianhaze
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2009-09-27 00:02:51]
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Re: A soundless echo
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 12:16:28 AM AEST
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Re: A soundless echo
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 07:19:00 PM AEST
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| I know you say you want to edit this piece, but I find it quite an intriguing write. It has a lot of depth to it. I will have to check out more of your writing. |
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Re: A soundless echo
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 07:45:28 PM AEST
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a great compilation of words conveying such emotion. the last stanza says it all... great job
take care
-K.Z. |
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