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Time Bomb
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 26th September 2009 @ 07:22:21 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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The wick's fire lit,
incinerating quickly,
time is running out.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-09-26 19:22:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Time Bomb
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 26th September 2009 @ 07:57:52 PM AEST (User
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i just had a notion of urgency and panic from reading this. imagine how professional bomb defusers feel! good job
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Re: Time Bomb
(User Rating: 1 ) by LadyRose on
Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 09:12:54 AM AEST (User
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your really good at this,you really know how to put it all done in a few words.........and still draw so much attention to these words....
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