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Because I love You
Contributed by
musicrox13
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Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 07:31:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why do I do the things I do? Because I love you,
He calls me names and makes me sad,
But still you wish I'd call him dad,
So why do I go day by day smileing saying I'm fine when I'm not,
So why do I do the things I do? Because I love you.
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Re: Because I love You
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by amarillys on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 07:47:30 AM AEST
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| This poem hits home for me. I too know what it is like to live my life to please my mom. You wrote it beautifully and simply. Thank You |
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Re: Because I love You
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 04:45:34 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. It's amazing what we'll do to please our parents. Great piece!
Heidi |
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Re: Because I love You
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by AngelFox on
Saturday, 26th September 2009 @ 10:15:32 AM AEST
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| Your words are your weapons. Continue to find refugee in your lyrics and they will set you free literately. If there was'nt any pain in the world, powerful poetry like yours would not exist. Continue writing....we hear you loud and clear!!! |
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Re: Because I love You
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by live_love_laugh on
Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 01:14:34 PM AEST
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This is SUCH A GOOD poem!
Good job mimi(:
i have tears in my eyes right now! |
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