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Suicide
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
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Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 03:56:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I am the act that darkens the light
At the end of the tunnel; so slight
I am the solution to all of your pain
Hurting your friends with nothin' to gain
I am the final end of your life
Living within your gun or your knife.
Should you take my hand
I will take you to a land
Where your heartache is no more
What are you waiting for...?
My result is just far too cold
I take the lives of young and old
Permanent is always how I end
Don't think twice; I'm not a friend
I call from the back of your mind
And hold on to yourself; try and find...
As you come, and take my hand
I shall lead you to a land
Here your torment is no more
That is what suicide is for.
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MoonlightKiss
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2009-09-24 15:56:42]
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Re: Suicide
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 06:23:36 PM AEST
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The only thing wrong with suicide is it's so damned permanent and you don't get any do-overs. Life can be tough at times, but in the great big scheme of the universe, we're only here for a billionth of a nanosecond anyway so party down dudes and dudettes and live life the the max!
That is what life is for!! |
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Re: Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 03:43:02 AM AEST
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Tragic though it may be, it's also disturbingly common. There are so many people who are neglected by this world that feel their only remaining option is to end it all. I think that's a rather sad Indictment on humanity.
-Phil |
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Re: Suicide
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by amarillys on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 08:00:25 AM AEST
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| Unfortunately the truth about life is that there are so many who wish to end it. It makes me sad that so many feel helpless and alone. The poem was well written and paints a very dark portrait. |
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Re: Suicide
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by picklepuss on
Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 06:52:55 PM AEST
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| Well written and truthful, but suicide is no game. I will grieve the rest of my life because my son completed suicide. He was one of many who take their lives every 16 minutes; that's a tv show segment. Live the life God has given you and be grateful for every breath. It's a gift. Suicide is the enemy talking. He knows he will one day die and he doesn't want to die alone. Let's let him. |
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