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I Just Found Out
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 06:19:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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My heart is shrapnel;
jagged pieces stab within.
A hollow heart stays.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-09-23 18:19:12]
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Re: I Just Found Out
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 10:01:54 PM AEST
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Having trust issues myself; having a heart of shrapnel, myself, I sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo relate to this. Excellent expression within the confines of a haiku!
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Re: I Just Found Out
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by LadyRose on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 03:19:16 AM AEST
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| why trust if people just hurt and disappoint you?..............I feel this to but I try not to treat everyone with this objection........Trust is such a strong thing and it needs a strong person to do it....... |
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Re: I Just Found Out
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by musicrox13 on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 07:25:39 PM AEST
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| I. LOVED. IT i can soooooooo relate to this i fell the same way constantly!!! you are an awsome poet keep writing |
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